Tainted Desires
Unforgettable -
Your refections in people's memory.
Unspeakable -
Your presence itself.
Your glance -
Draws people as if in trance.
Your voice -
Drowns people as if you're void.
Glittering hazel eyes.
Perfect porcelain skin.
Such tantalizing eyes.
Such undefined beauty.
At your stare,
Her body trembles with anxiousness.
At your whisper,
Chills run down her spines.
Cold fingers that caresses her.
Warm lips that kisses her.
You drive her crazy.
You filled her with tainted desires.
Thoughts...
Leave a Comment | Comment box is Gravatar enabled
RSS
August 2nd 2007 at 12:33 pm
First to comment! :grin:
Ooo, sounds like it's filled with lust. :eek: Unless I read wrong, which I probably did. >>
August 2nd 2007 at 1:25 pm
I wonder if writers always write from the heart, or from experience. Maybe both? Hopefully both. :) It's very beautiful.
August 2nd 2007 at 4:03 pm
b-e-a-tiful
August 3rd 2007 at 1:07 am
Yup, it's Rya alright =) Btw, I like the design of your blog. The sidebar and that pic on top right - manage to pack in the links yet stay neat and nice.
August 3rd 2007 at 1:07 am
nice poems.. really! rar! :grin:
August 3rd 2007 at 10:58 am
@ Stepherz ~
Writers don't usually write based from their experience. Sometimes, it's somebody else's sometimes, it's just born out of pure imagination and creativity. Yet, one thing you must always remember is not to read too much to it, nor read less from it. :)
August 3rd 2007 at 1:23 pm
Wow poetic na naman ang ate! hehehehe....
August 3rd 2007 at 2:42 pm
Fawesome. I love the title! But brush up on your grammar, like, y'know, subject-verb agreement and such. Other than that, you're doing fine. :razz:
August 3rd 2007 at 3:09 pm
Nice, nice.
August 3rd 2007 at 5:26 pm
@ Talamasca ~
I saw that too. Just now. XP
August 3rd 2007 at 5:36 pm
Filled with desire. Love it. <3 *aww*
August 3rd 2007 at 9:56 pm
Hay, i want to write an utter wangsty poem but all I can think of are romantic stories!
August 4th 2007 at 1:01 am
Blog hopping :) Nice Poem
August 4th 2007 at 9:22 pm
nice poem!! keep it up!
i love the first 2 stanzas by the way. it's as if those words are magical.
August 4th 2007 at 9:25 pm
no offense to tala (hi tala! still remember me? LOL) and euri, but when it comes to writing poems and songs, it's not a must to follow the SV agreement. remember poetical license?
janelle says:
i hope poetical license also works on essays! bwahaha!