Comments on: Pure White Wings http://soul.beyondeternal.com/poetry/pure-white-wings/ Because humans are born to sin. Fri, 05 Mar 2010 05:40:26 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.9.2 hourly 1 By: Gary R. Hess http://soul.beyondeternal.com/poetry/pure-white-wings/comment-page-1/#comment-14206 Gary R. Hess Wed, 25 Jun 2008 17:09:34 +0000 http://soul.beyondeternal.com/poetry/pure-white-wings/#comment-14206 The good sometimes break... evil escapes and we are no longer pure. Gary R. Hesss last blog post..<a href="http://blog.poemofquotes.com/balloon-race-begun/" rel="nofollow">Balloon Race Begun</a> The good sometimes break... evil escapes and we are no longer pure.

Gary R. Hesss last blog post..Balloon Race Begun

]]> By: runawaycat http://soul.beyondeternal.com/poetry/pure-white-wings/comment-page-1/#comment-12618 runawaycat Fri, 11 Jan 2008 14:22:03 +0000 http://soul.beyondeternal.com/poetry/pure-white-wings/#comment-12618 I'm an ox too :) This reminds me of the song Broken Wings I'm an ox too :) This reminds me of the song Broken Wings

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]]> By: Euri http://soul.beyondeternal.com/poetry/pure-white-wings/comment-page-1/#comment-12584 Euri Mon, 07 Jan 2008 07:19:49 +0000 http://soul.beyondeternal.com/poetry/pure-white-wings/#comment-12584 Nope, I am not a rabbit. I'm an ox, actually. :) Nope, I am not a rabbit. I'm an ox, actually. :)

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]]> By: Nelson http://soul.beyondeternal.com/poetry/pure-white-wings/comment-page-1/#comment-12582 Nelson Mon, 07 Jan 2008 04:48:50 +0000 http://soul.beyondeternal.com/poetry/pure-white-wings/#comment-12582 Hmm.. I'd say this one's pretty good. I just hate tragic endings though. And the second line bothers me. Is the word "me" really repeated? I know there's such a thing called poetic license but.. So you're a rabbit huh. Wishing you all the luck in love life then! :grin: Hmm.. I'd say this one's pretty good. I just hate tragic endings though. And the second line bothers me. Is the word "me" really repeated? I know there's such a thing called poetic license but..

So you're a rabbit huh. Wishing you all the luck in love life then! :grin:

]]> By: Euri http://soul.beyondeternal.com/poetry/pure-white-wings/comment-page-1/#comment-12581 Euri Mon, 07 Jan 2008 01:38:00 +0000 http://soul.beyondeternal.com/poetry/pure-white-wings/#comment-12581 <blockquote>i know its kind of rude to comment on a poem,</blockquote> When did commenting to a poem became rude? Children are innocent, yet as they grew, they tend to get tainted. Being tainted is human nature, because we are humans, we sin. :) Side note: *points above to my blog title*

i know its kind of rude to comment on a poem,

When did commenting to a poem became rude?

Children are innocent, yet as they grew, they tend to get tainted. Being tainted is human nature, because we are humans, we sin. :)

Side note:
*points above to my blog title*

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]]> By: christian http://soul.beyondeternal.com/poetry/pure-white-wings/comment-page-1/#comment-12579 christian Sun, 06 Jan 2008 16:13:45 +0000 http://soul.beyondeternal.com/poetry/pure-white-wings/#comment-12579 i know its kind of rude to comment on a poem, but i am still going to comment, hehehe. ang ganda, tragic. oo nga, sa mundo na 'to, nothing ever remains white, how even the purest things get to suffer like hell, and how the world turns everyone to monsters. and what's worse than the struggles? of course the memory of it, the memory that haunts you and repeats the moment in your head in an endless loop. why does purity never last?why does entropy exist? i know its kind of rude to comment on a poem, but i am still going to comment, hehehe. ang ganda, tragic. oo nga, sa mundo na 'to, nothing ever remains white, how even the purest things get to suffer like hell, and how the world turns everyone to monsters. and what's worse than the struggles? of course the memory of it, the memory that haunts you and repeats the moment in your head in an endless loop. why does purity never last?why does entropy exist?

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