It Simply Died
Two hearts
That cared so much.
Two minds
that never met.
We kept on stumbling.
We kept falling.
More and more,
Again and again.
We stood up each time
And stumbled again.
Until both of us
Were wounded all over.
Too much pain
For our hearts to bear.
Too much tears
For us to hide.
Our hearts
Suffered long enough.
Our love
It simply died.
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February 15th 2007 at 12:07 pm
Nicely strung words. Evocative of pain, indeed. Lovely poem.
February 15th 2007 at 4:55 pm
Nice. It's refreshing to see a good poetry, here and there.
By, the way I saw, that you're a fellow atheist. You might be interested in what I wrote recently, Hitler: The Man who used Evangelical Christians to Massacre Atheists.
:)
February 15th 2007 at 5:11 pm
hello ang ganda ng poetry kaya lng amlungkot????
February 15th 2007 at 6:29 pm
Whoa! Shakespeare, is that you? 8)
Anyway, aside from the delivery, I dig the symmetrical aspect of the poem. Good job.
February 15th 2007 at 7:22 pm
Oh very beautiful! I love the words used in this poem. :) Excellent job once again, Euri.
February 15th 2007 at 8:07 pm
waaaoiii
pangilan lipat mo na yan?
mga kelan mawawala?
cgecge, back up na ako.. basta info mo aq pag talagang malapit na ha...
February 15th 2007 at 8:48 pm
di naman ako reklamo eh...
^__^;;;
d ba magastos gngawa mo?
February 15th 2007 at 8:50 pm
nahuli ata
February 15th 2007 at 8:51 pm
bawal html? *sensya, post uli*
gnun..hmm..heto oh
http://img259.imageshack.us/ img259/4613/rosevalentineqi9 .jpg
February 15th 2007 at 11:52 pm
aww... that poem hurts... but aside from heartaches and post-valentine thingies... Imma nominate you sa phil blog awards if no one has done it yet... and ill vote for you... I still read your blog for some reason nahihiya lang ako magcomment... hehe... anyway, blogging mode ulit ako... im not just sure for how long i can sustain this...
February 16th 2007 at 3:09 am
Awww. Sad. :(
February 20th 2007 at 12:45 pm
Wow, this reminds me of...yeah...
It's very lovely. I enjoy your writing.